can ANYONE who's in college please read over my personal essay(to get into college) and make any changes needed to make the essay better??

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Answer: I can help. But I will need to say your essay (to upload a PDF on Brainly, go on desktop mode on mobile, or use a desktop).


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Horror, fantasy, and comedy are all _______ of novels. A. informational types   B. subgenres   C. literary kinds   D. styles

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I think 99.99% it’s B.genres

NOVEL GENRES Although the novel is itself a literary genre, it can be broken into subgenres,such as horror, fantasy, romance, mystery, and comedy. The list goes on and on. Each genre has certain conventions that allow readers to recognize it as a certain type of story soon after they begin reading it. These conventions involve both content and style. For example, if you read a story that begins “It was a dark and stormy night,” you immediately develop certain expectations. You assume that the book is probably a work of mystery or suspense. However, if a book begins with “The sun danced on the wildflowers on this beautiful June morning,” you develop a very different set of expectations.

The correct answer is B. Subgenres

Which literary technique does the poet use in these lines from Beowulf?That [sword] was not useless
to the warrior now.

caesura
alliteration
litotes
kennings

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I think this might be multiple choice because it uses alliteration , litotes, and kennings.I think it might be all three. That's all I can come up with. Hope it helps!

the answer is litotes

The expression of ________, as heard in John Dowland's Flow My Tears, was a prominent feature of English literature and music in the time of William Shakespeare.

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The correct answer is melancholy

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John Dowland in 1563 –1626 brought the art of weeping to an magnificent height in the early 17th century. This English Renaissance writer, lutenist, and singer became famous for his melancholy songs that have an ingrained darkness that stands in contrast to much of the other music from this.

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The Forum served as a stage for Roman politicians and philosophers. It was a sort of a square where people gathered to hear these politicians and philosophers speak. 

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Forum

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Which theme best reflects the ideals of modernist writers

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the thing that best reflects the ideas of modernist writers is life and expression

In which way is Anne's diary different from an autobiography that she might have written later in life? A.
The diary was not intended for publication.

B.
The diary uses first-person point of view.

C.
The diary reports the activities and words of others in Anne's life.

D.
The diary cannot capture Anne's honest and frank thoughts.

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Anne Frank's diary was different from other autobiographies and from one she may have written later in life because her diary was never meant to be read by anyone else on Earth. She had no idea that her diary would be found after her death and published.
A. The Diary of Anne Frank was never intended for publication which is why it is so riveting. She did not write this for the public and these are her most intimate thoughts. An autobiography often just recounts the speaker's life. But with Anne we are there, we are experiencing it with her raw emotions.