ENGLISH HIGH SCHOOL

When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear? changing "her sister" to "the girl" changing "she" to "Breanna" changing "Breanna" to "she" changing "flour" to "it"

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Answer 1
Answer: I’m not sure but I would say changing “she” to “Breanna” because in that sentence it’s hard to tell if “she” means Breanna or her sister
Answer 2
Answer:

Answer:

Changing “she” to Brenna

Explanation:

Because the sentence refers to both Brenna and her sister the reader does not know who “she” is

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After 1950, the authorial voices that contributed to American literature were more likely than ever to be those of __________. wealthy white aristocrats


immigrants from other countries


people from underrepresented groups


veterans of WWI

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After 1950, the authorial voices that contributed to American literature were more likely than ever to be those of people from underrepresented groups.

After 1950, the authorial voices that contributed to American literature were more likely than ever to be those of people from underrepresented groups.  

After 1950, more people from traditionally underrepresented groups made further contributions to American literature.

The 1950s and ’60s witnessed great cultural shifts within the United States encouraged by the civil rights movement and the women’s movement.

Before the last decades of the 20th century, American literature was largely the story of dead white men who had created Art and of living white men doing the same.  

Who was a Renaissance scientist who felt truth was a standard to uphold.

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Answer:

Sir Isaac Newton

Explanation:

bc it just is

Answer: Sir Issac newton

Explanation: I read many articles and documents that say it is Issac newton.

Edit: I just realized how late I was sorry, your probably not even in high school anymore

When can it be problematic to include too many flashbacks?A.
When the flashbacks include vivid details that make the reader feel engaged in the scene

B.
When the flashbacks provide additional insight into the characters' present situation

C.
When the flashbacks distract the reader from what is happening in the story's present

D.
When the flashbacks occur in a setting that is different from the story's present moment

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Most likely c
Sorry if I’m wrong

Answer:

The best answer is C) When the flashbacks distract the reader from what is happening in the story's present.

Explanation:

A) This is a good thing; you want the reader to feel engaged.

B) This is also a good thing; the purpose of flashbacks is to provide insight into the character's present situation.

C) This is the correct answer because this is a negative thing.

D) This is a good thing; you want a variety of scenery in a story.

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Which salutation is punctuated correctly? A. Dear Ladies- B. To the chairman of the company; C. Dear Sir: D. Dear Councilman Briggs.

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its C for sure dear sir:

The evolution of the eohippus into the modern day horse is an example of _____.character change
stasis
extinction
metamorphosis

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The evolution of the eohippus into the modern day horse is an example of metamorphosis.

A character change would be internal, stasis means to remain the same and extinction is the end of an organism, the eohippus is extinct, but the question is asking specifically about it's change. Therefore choice 4 is the correct answer.

Answer:

the right answer is character change

Explanation:

because it just took the assignment and i got it wrong so it is CHARACTER CHANGE

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b. Heaviness
c. Wildness
d. Solitude

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I think that the phrase "grizzly bear" suggests A. ferocity - a grizzly bear after hibernation is likely very hungry, and because of this aggressive, and it can be additionally aggressive to protect its children if it's a "momma".

A. ferocity is the answer for this

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