Which sentence should be revised to make this summary more objective? [1] Thomas Paine states that to talk of friendship with Britain is unwise. [2] Relations between the countries are steadily declining, and he is certain that they will not improve. [3] Paine concludes that reconciliation is not possible because some injuries are unforgivable. [4] Paine’s logic is indisputable; without his words, America might have remained subject to British rule to this day.

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Answer 1
Answer:

The correct answer is Sentence 4 "Paine’s logic is indisputable; without his words, America might have remained subject to British rule to this day".

Explanation:

The word "objective" refers to the quality of text in which the author just reports facts or evidence rather than personal opinions or judgments. In the case of summarizes that are brief accounts of the ideas of another text, a summary is objective when it only includes the ideas of the original text rather than the ideas or opinions of the person writing the summary.

This implies in the case of the text presented that summarizes the ideas of Thomas Paine the sentence that is subjective and needs to be revised to make the summary objective is "Paine’s logic is indisputable; without his words, America might have remained subject to British rule to this day" (Sentence 4) because in this sentence the author of the summary includes his personal perspective but judging  Paine's ideas as indisputable and necessary which is not adequate as only the ideas of the ideas of the original text and not the ideas of the author of the summary need to be included for objectivity.

Answer 2
Answer: The sentence which should be revised to make the summary more objective is the following:

[2] Relations between the countries are steadily declining, and he is certain that they will not improve.

To define, objective means unbiased and independent of other person's views. This sentence connotes a close-minded conclusion.

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a sentence with no grammar
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An inverted sentence is a sentence with reversed order, which means that the predicate (verb) is stated first before the subject (noun). This is done to emphasize the verb in the sentence. An example of an inverted sentence is: In the garden, bloomed colorful flowers. 

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When a poet wishes to use figurative language he or she will use words that are double in meaning. The poet may use an exaggerated expression or something nonhuman, anthropomorphosize, use the figure of speeches like apostrophe, simile, hyperbole, metaphor, personification, oxymoron, and many others.
These figurative language gives style to the author, creating a more artistic figure in writing that entices reader to actually delve into and know its true identity or interpretation.

Answer: both connotative and denotative

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Use the sentences to complete the activity. To reach her goal of buying a new bike, Marsha will need to save $10 each week. To reach her goal of buying a new bike each week, Marsha will need to save $10. In three to five sentences, explain how the placement of the italicized phrase changes the meaning of the sentence. (4 points)

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We can see that the placement of the italicized phrase changes the meaning of the sentence by showing that she has a goal of buying a new bike every week.

What is phrase?

A phrase refers to the unit of words or group of words that actually act together. They are usually seen as a grammatical unit. Phrases are seen even within clauses.

We can see that when the position of the italicized phrase is replaced, we see a different meaning that Marsha is buying bike each week.

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In the first sentence, she will need to save $10 each week to get 1 bike. In the sentence, she will have to save $10 in all to buy a different bike for each week. The first one makes the most sence, knowing how much bikes cost these days.

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D. reckless

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The correct answer is C. Unimpressive.

Other possible options do not relate to the meaning of formidable in any way.

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Susan doesn't want to worry you with her problems. 
First of all, you need a verb in this sentence, so you can immediately rule out wary because it is only an adjective (and plus it means cautious, so it doesn't fit here). Inform means to notify, so it's not correct either. Defame means to damage someone's reputation so it obviously doesn't belong here either.
The correct answer, in my opinion, is C. worry. "Inform" has too neutral a meaning to be employed in this context. "Defame" means slander, denigrate, libel, smear - so it makes no sense in this sentence. On the other hand, "wary" is an adjective that means cautious, distrustful, suspicious, so it also makes no sense. Susan is just considerate, so she doesn't want to cause other people to worry because of her problems.

Which sentence contains a pun?a. A humble life of peace and quiet is better than a splendid one with danger and risk.
b. It is better to be thought a fool than to open one's mouth and erase all doubt.
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The answer would be C. Boomerangs, when thrown, are made to circle back to the user who threw it. The pun is a play on their memory returning to them just as a boomerang would come back to them.

The anwer to the question above would be that the sentence that contains a pun is the following one: I could not remember how to throw a boomerang, but it eventually came back to me.

In order to understand the pun, you need to know what the meaning of "boomerang" is. A boomerang is "a curve stick that, when throw in a particular way, comes back to the person who threw it". Here the pun has to do with the fact that memories can also come back to you, just as boomerangs do.