I had to this assignment for writing class what do you think about it??Please tell me what I need to do differently thanks.
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Answer:
- You changed the type of narration in the first sentence you said you were Lizzy and in the second sentence you were story telling third person.
- The better way to word the second sentence is: 'Lizzy was a senior in high school and had been thinking about going to Harvard university but then plans changed however not for the better.'
- You can try to find more complicated words to make the text more interesting.
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a teachers' expectations with what actually happened
b students' expectations with what actually happened
c Bridge the Divide's plans for discussions with how
they were actually conducted
d all of the above
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Answer:
d all of the above
Explanation:
This is because, both the teachers expectation, the student expectation with what happened was what the author contrast in the section involved. Also, the discussion on what actually happened has a contributing factor.
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Hope I helped!
- Amber
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2. He is an American poet and novelist
3. He was born in California
4.