Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?
A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.
To improve the sentence indicated above, the bolded section was changed in this way:
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.
The sentence becomes better because redundant words were eliminated yet the thought was still preserved concisely and precisely.
The answer is D i took the quiz and got a 100
A.Park
B.North America
C.America
Good Morning
Answer : C
North America
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Puritans wanted a simpler and direct form of worship. They wanted to remove many ceremonial practices from the Church of England that were similar to the Catholic Church. They also share the same beliefs that it is through faith and the Bible that one can achieve salvation.