Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
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The answer is D i took the quiz and got a 100
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Theseus slays the Minotaur.
King Minos demands fourteen Athenian youths each year to pay for his son’s life.
Aegeus falls into the sea and drowns.
Answer:
King Minos demands fourteen Athenian youths each year to pay for his son’s life.
The princess provides Theseus with a sharp sword and a ball of thread.
Theseus slays the Minotaur.
Aegeus falls into the sea and drowns.
Explanation:
"The Cruel Tribute" by James Baldwin is based on the Greek mythology of the monster Minotaur and the tribute asked by King Minos.
As a form of revenge and re-compensation for his son's death, King Minos asked the city of Athens to pay an annual tribute of seven maidens and seven young men to his kingdom. One year, Theseus, the king's son decided to volunteer for the tribute. There, he met the princess who fell in love with him. So, before they were taken to the cave of the monster Minotaur, she provided a thread and a sword to Theseus. The thread was for them to find their way back to the entrance and the sword to kill Minotaur. Theseus slays the monster and escaped with the other youths, along with the princess. King Aegeus had told the men to put up a white sail if his son is alive. But in their excitement and happiness, they forgot to put up the white sail. When Aegeus saw the black sail still flying in the approaching ship, he fell into the sea and drowned.
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I agree
Explanation:
There is a world-wide general development of teenagers becoming adults sooner (or teenagers with adult behaviour) in every possible way.
Modern technology (my little 5-year old daughter know how to use a cellphone better than I do) and a modern society, where the clear authoritarian generation-division of parents and children is diminishing, are factors that contribute to more and more 'teen-adults'.
So yes, I think it is a good idea. What should be a real point of discussion is the deeply felt sence in this country that politicians no longer present the people anymore. There is something seriously wrong with the whole American democracy and its voting system.